Kindly give feedback on my designs...please

Hello, my template was with a font that is not free. I am not allowed to use this. So the font has to differ slightly from my template. Otherwise I have legal problems with the owner of the font

Kindly give feedback on my designs...please

please check my design #27717763 it's 100% created by me and it's not a font

My template is the Chicano font. We are not allowed to use them. Reconstructing these is not allowed. The new font must look a little different, but the style can be similar