please sir check my design #27746242,, feedback please i will wait for your feedback Thank you

Dear sir,
possible feedback on my design #27800323 would be much-appreciated .
Regards.

Dear Contest Holder, just to wish you a great Holidays Season and let you know that I’ll be working as usual till 23rd of December The week after I’ll have s short break and be back to work again by 2nd of January. All the best to your contest and always at your service, artespraticas