please check my design #27752697 feedback please i will wait for your replay, thank you

Hello,
would be great to know your feedback on designs just to check if I'm on the right track. If you don't like entries please just eliminate them outright or leave unrated (low rating 1-4 stars damages designers overall rating).
Thanks for understanding and good luck with the project.

Hello,
I have submitted a new design.
Please check the design id #27757159.
And provide me with some feedback Pls!
Thank you.