please check my design #27818536 feedback please ..

feedback please on design #27818852

Hi, Please check #27843411 #27843412 #27843413 #27843414.
And let me know if you need any change.

Thank you :)

(#27847134) I want to help you but I want to understand what your needs are? How do you make decisions?
I want to understand what has prevented you from having success up to this point and if I can truly help you, I will. Thanks.