hello sir please check my submission #27845019 and feedback please

I provided feedback on the design.

Thanks

ALL DESIGNERS,

I have updated my design brief and uploaded a PDF with more clear direction on what we are looking for in a Logo. Please review and feel free to update your designs and/or submit a new theme.

Thanks for all of your work to date!!

Dear sir,
possible feedback on my design #27888568 would be much-appreciated .
Regards.