If you open this up to more designers, I would certainly try my best at modifying your logo. I am a huge hockey fan.

Hi Project Owner,
I've submitted some design proposals for your logo design according to your brief. Please provide your feedback if I'm on the right track or if further adjustments are required.
Cheers and thanks,
Slant Line Media

feedback, please on my submission design #28166532, kind regards

feedback please!

feedback please on. my design #28166676 and #28166677 , regards