feedback, please on my design #28217022 regards

Sir please check my design #28225830 and feedback please. I'm waiting for your reply. Thank you.

Please see updated project description for important concept updates after initial discussion with the client on concepts already submitted.

Please see updated project description for important concept updates. Client does not like the comic book feel.

Sir please check my design #28276058 and feedback please. Thank you .

Please take the ?? the one entry where you have it. So I can see. W want this logo to be used for his football and personal business ventures.

Sir please check my changes in design #28276979 and feedback please. I'm always ready for work until you satisfy. Thank you.

Hi. Can you send one of this design with the letters being black (solid) and then one where the letters just have a black outline and a clear center? This is going to be the winning design. We are just trying to finalize how many vector files we will need. And the client wants to see that outlined version. Thank you so much for your hard wirk on this.