feedback please!

Now provided, sorry, it was not suitable

Hi, Project Owner!

I have submitted my design (#28308936 and I appreciate it if you can provide me feedback, please don't hesitate to ask if you need any changes.
Thank You.

Best regards,
Taku

Hello,
Kindly provide me with your valuable feedback for Design #28316715 to know if i am in the right direction. please
Waiting!!!
Best Regards