Sir please check my design #28397107 and feedback please. Thank you.

Hi Respected Sir.
Please review the designs #28405229, #28405218 and let me know how are they.
I hope you'll love they.
And please don't hesitate to ask if you need any changes.
I'll be waiting for your valuable feedback.
Thank you :)
(In case you don't like any of these, Just let me know I'll go with a different approach)