Dear Project Owner,
I am sorry you do not like the design, I would like to try again. If possible, could you please remove the star rating and eliminate the entry instead. As this affects the designer’s ability to design for other clients on design crowd. Thank you for understanding in this matter.
Regards,
Vincent.

Hello Sir,

I send my work for your reference #28441659
please provide me your feedback it will help to improve my work.

Best Regards,
Sekar

Dear Honorable Sir,

Have a great day.

possible feedback on my design #28444613 would be much-appreciated .

I hope you'll love my concept.

Please don't be hesitate to ask for revision if you need any changes.

Regards.

(In case if you don't like my concept, Just let me know I'll go with a different approach)