Hi,
Your comments are very useful for me to improve it better and right way. Thank you

Sir, please check my design #28669207 and feedback, please. Thank you.

KINDLY CHECK MY INTERPRETATION OF YOUR LOGO (DESIGN NO - #28669607, #28669606). ANY KIND OF FEEDBACK WILL BE APPRECIATED. IF YOU DO NOT LIKE IT PLEASE ELIMINATE THE DESIGN.

Hello,
Please review my design and let me know your thought.

Best.