Sir, please check my design #28740510 and feedback, please. Thank you.

feedback please on my submission design #28749921 and #28749922 , regards

Hello. Check, please design. If something needs to change, write to me. Thank you!
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hello sir,

please provide your valuable feedback on my design #28750366 and #28750367 .

thanks.