feedback please on design #28781262 and #28781263 , regards

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hello sir,
please check my design, #28786179, #28786180.
thanks and regards.

Hello,
would be great to know your feedback on my design #28789025 just to check if I'm on the right track.
If you don't like entries please just eliminate them outright or leave unrated (low rating 1-3 stars damages designers overall rating).
Thanks for understanding and good luck with the project.

Dear plz do check my design