Hi any feedback with my design Sir

Hi there :) 

I just submitted my design today beautifully crafted and according to your requirements. Please check the designs (#28950781), (#28950782)
Looking forward to get your valuable feedback... 
Regards  

we would likest dawg dressed in green cammoflouge uniform "SGT STRIPES"[Non image link removed]
holding a glass of lemonade in one hand and a hot dog in the other
tie it all together with bold
SGT DAWG lettering

Hi Sir please check my updated logo design Thanks