feedback please on my submitted design #28944267 and #28944269 , thanks

Hello,
Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

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Looking forward to your valuable feedback, Thank you!

Hi,

Please provide your valuable feedback on my entries #28944243, #28944278, #28944324, #28944518 and #28944538. Please advise on the colors of your choice so that I can incorporate them in these designs.

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