feedback me on design 30155412 , thanks

Feedback is most appreciate

Hello, please provide your valuable feedback on my design #30173706. Thank you.

General feedback to all contestants:
We are looking for a remarkable elegant logo design. Easy to grasp. It should be clean, smart/efficient, without superfluous elements in it. Feel free to suggest some color other then black and white as long as you stick to the brief design. Good luck!

feedback, please!