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please check my design #30518790 feedback please, Thank you

Hi, Cale Krogman!

I have submitted my design #30519503, and I appreciate it if you can provide me feedback, please don't hesitate to ask if you need any changes.
Thank You.

Best regards,
Adeliow

Feedback is most appreciated thank you