feedback me on design 30559520 and 30559521 , thanks

Hi,

I have submitted my design #30569377 / #30569379 / #30569382 / #30569384 / #30569409 / #30569452 and I would appreciate it if you can provide me feedback, please don't hesitate to ask if you need any changes.
Thank You.

Best regards,
Bocalm