feedback please on my submitted design :)

Could you please provide the old logo of your company in the brief, and let us know..
What is the reason you want to change your old logo?
Is there anything you want to keep about your old logo?
Is there anything you want to remove from your old logo?

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Hello
do you check my revision design??