Please review and provide feedback (Design Id #33404755)

Hi! would you be so kind as to provide feedback on the designs I sent you and if there is anything that I could be improved, just let me know.
Thank you
#4074956 (Design Id #33415315)

Based on the brief, are you considering something abstracted in design or closer to the style of your previous image of the elephant? Thanks for reading

Thank you for the note, it would be great if it was an image vs. an abstract - closer to what we had with the elephant. We can use something else related to science, like a monkey or a mouse, as long as they were inviting and provoking a great reaction.

I submitted a new concept. Does that seem more like what you were envisioning? Thanks for the extra info!

Thank you for the submission but so sorry, some of the images were either too faded or the one with the mouse was not so inviting as the mouse looked too scared. The image is meant to be inviting.