feedback me on design #33942870 , thanks

I've submitted a design. Would be great for feedbacks. ;-)

Hi!
I've just submitted a concept for you to check out: Design ID #33944359
It may still need some polish and refinements, but it would be great if you could tell me if I'm going in the right direction. If you can, please guide me to the direction you would rather want me to go.
Thanks.

Hi Sir please provide some feedback on my designs.
Thanks.

Sir,
The logo design for [Healthwise] has been completed and submitted! I hope it captures the essence and vision of your brand.
Please take a look and let me know your thoughts. I'm happy to make any adjustments if needed.
Looking forward to your feedback!
Contest(#4081689)
Best,
[PixelCrowd BD]

feedback me on design (#4081689) , thanks

Dear Please Check my designs 33956583 and 33956582
Thank you