feedback me on design #34081412 and #34081413 , thanks

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hello there ,
I would like to know your opinion on my entries at #4083187 and #4083187
and if you want anything to change let me know thanks,

Dear Please Check my designs
https://www.designcrowd.com/design/34096737
I hope you like them
Thank you