Hi there,
I have so many questions before I get it perfectly right.
Based on my understating and attachments, I have come up with a more user friendly and easy to use design.
If you think I have the right skills, lets talk to get it exactly as it should be.
First attempt submitted to judge upon.
Thank you!

Hi, the overview should show more information. Too much information is hidden in your design.

In general, you should display the same information that is on display in the wireframes, but just change the design / layout / style

Dear project owner,
could you please check my design and provide your initial thoughts of my work . thank you.

Hi Project Owner, Is it okay to ask for an extension of the deadline? I just accepted the invite and will submit my entry soon. Thanks!