Please provide feedback on my design..

Thank you for soo many designs, the quality of submissions has made reviewing very difficult but I'm going through these - just because it's a no doesn't mean your design was bad, just that it wasn't quite what I wanted. Thanks :-)

Dear Project Owner,
Kindly check out my submissions #34739421
Your feedback will be highly appreciated.
Thank you.

Best regards,
rgb01

Hi! Any feedback on #34739668 would be highly appreciated :)
Regards

I've uploaded revision #34740380 to the #34739668 design
Regards :)