feedback me on design #37253237 , regards

please check my design #37254642 feedback please,Thank you

Hi There,
I’ve just submitted two designs for your project (ID:#37255561 #37255559 )
It would mean a lot if you could take a look at the description, where I’ve shared the thoughts behind the concepts.
I look forward to hearing your feedback!
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Best regards,
Ha.Connick