Can i make it 2-3 col ?

yes

Okay sir,
Thanks

May I know what printing type do you use for your shirt? dtf, dtg or screen printing?
please response

Screen print

okay thanks.
By the way, I have submission, can you check it please and let me know if that is right or need some revision

Sir,
feedback plz! (Design Id #37347810).
Thank you so much.

Hi,
I submitted a design; however, I wasn't completely sure about the text. Based on John 1:5, the verse reads: "The light shines in the darkness, and the darkness has not overcome it."
The brief, however, states: "Light Up The Darkness" and references John 1:5 as "...Light the darkness cannot overcome!"
Because of this difference, I wasn't certain which wording should be used, so I wanted to clarify whether the design text should follow the exact biblical verse or the wording provided in the brief.

Both if possible

Please check my design and provide me with a private feedback, thanks!!