Dear Madame/Sir,
I have submitted my designs.
I know you are busy but, would you mind to give me your feedback?
Please tell me if I am on the right track.
Thank you
Best regards,
Coco

Hi, Can you please provide feedback on my submission.
thanks,
sajithgopalan.

Dear Project Owner.
I apologise for my boldness.
Are you going to choose a winner on this project or at least eliminate designs you don't like.
Designers prefer to know where they stand.
Best wishes!
Coco

Thank you all for your submissions. We are discussing the designs with our team and will be making decisions this week. 

sir please please give your valuable feedback,I rely need it

feedback please.