i submitted a design. please have a feedback on it.. thank you!.

Thanks for your submission. I commend your effort but your design is too stiff and doesn''t connect. Our tagline is "The New Spirit". Try to capture the essence of a liberated "jumper" spirit and embody the number "7" and you''ll be on the right track. Keep up the effort.

thank for your reply sir.. i will try it again..

sir, do you want to include the word "the new sprit" to your logo?.. just clarifying! : ) .. tnx.

I submit a Design.Kindly check and give ur feedback.

Hello!
do you have any feedback about my design whit id: 181726?

hello , i am Franklin logo illustrator , any suggestion for my design  , and have some illustration for design ?

Hello,

For your new spirit feel logo, I was just wondering if you had the jumper art commissioned? If not we can't really incorporate it into our logo designs without breaching copyright.

Thank you for the comment. The jumper art was not commissioned by me and you're right that using the picture wholesale would entail an infringement of copyright, which I wish to avoid. I've included the artwork for inspiration and to provide an idea of what kind of "jumper" figure I'm looking for for those who want to incorporate it into the design. There should be some changes done to the figure to show a distinct originality. All the best!