hello, could you provide me full featured feedback on my design? thank u very much, have a blessed day.

Thank you so much for your quick reply and your quick design! I like the overall concept however the film reel looks a bit like the barrel of a gun pointing at the viewer. Perhaps if you had 5 holes instead of 4 - or a different shape film reel like this:
https://www.google.com/search?q=film+reel+vector&espv=2&biw=1440&bih=802&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ei=dKM9VLnbLvS1sQS3wYKYCA&ved=0CAYQ_AUoAQ#facrc=_&imgdii=_&imgrc=FNiMfEBdO0zitM%253A%3B8y3MGrWUN3q82M%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fimage.shutterstock.com%252Fdisplay_pic_with_logo%252F499165%252F499165%252C1262072399%252C11%252Fstock-vector-film-reel-original-vector-illustration-film-reel-concept-43521523.jpg%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fwww.shutterstock.com%252Fpic-43521523%252Fstock-vector-film-reel-original-vector-illustration-film-reel-concept.html%3B450%3B321

Hello. Could i get feedback on my revisions? Thank u much :)

Thank you for the changes you made. I will provide more feedback after I share with the client. I appreciate your work!
Amy

could u please give feedback on my design id hate to be stuck with something on here that u don't like and no chance to fix it, please help me out in this area, thank you again :) have a great day

Hi, can I ask for feedback on my design? Thanks

Thanks so much for your submission. It's really nice! We are meeting with the client (we are the marketing agency) on Monday 11/3 and will provide feedback at that time.

Amy