Hello there. Wondering have you considered shortening the amount of text you want in this logo. In all honesty there is simply too much info to create what i think would be a great logo. Hence also the small amount of submissions your receiving. Think less = more! =)

I agree with this whole heartily. The slogan should be used for headlines, or in conduction with the logo on the advertisement, website, business cards, etc. I was the leading art director for Club America Vacations and it was very successful. The owner made millions. It was a one color logo because it had to work in newspaper ares and almost daily flyers to agents.