just a thought.... I have seen cards in the past where it appears some of the letters etc. on cards has been forged or stamped into the card. maybe something to try?

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Dear Sir

Please check my design. Hope you like it. If any change needed feel free inform me any time I will change the design until your 100% satisfaction.

Have a nice day.

There are a lot of cards with too much white. while I do not mind a little, too much is not good for us, simply because they are usually finger printed up by the time we give them out. I do like the cards with the touch of blue...or maybe some other deeper color.

Also in our industry, blue prints are what we work off of. is there any idea where some design could be integrated into the card? just a thought, not a must