In need of a tattoo/logo Design

Esto es lo que Corinthians 13:4-8 or COR. 13:4-8 buscaba en su logo design

I want to get my first tattoo. For years I have not found anything worth being on my body for the rest of my life until now. Life events have made me take on the life theme of the scripture Corinthians 13:4-8. I want a simple/smart design that encompasses the infinity sign, 4 hearts - 1 representing me, a smaller one representing my wife, and two smaller ones representing my daughters. I want the hearts connected in a way that all are touching each other or the larger two hearts. Finally, I want to incorporate Corinthians 13:4-8 or COR. 13:4-8. I want something edgy, and minimalist and I like designs utilizing positive and negative space. I have attached a design that I made but my daughters says it looks too feminine. I want cutting edge/ modern/ SMART design.
Rejection will immediately occur if:
1) Your design looks anything like mine (It also shows that you did not read the brief)
2) No thought was given to the design (I'm a designer myself and trust me when I say I h… Leer más