feedback please #21165890 and #21165891, regards

owner of the contest, low ratings - one and two stars only demotivate designers to participate with new projects. Because low ratings lead the designer's rating to a crash. If you do not like a design, you better eliminate it without putting one or two stars. Thank you for your understanding

hello sir,
please check my design, #21172796...#21172797..

thanks and regards..