feedback please on design 25693557 and 25693558 , regards

Please check my design #25693566

Hello,
I have submit my new design. Please check the design #25699511.
Thank you.
Ri.

Please read designer instructions carefully.
Or let us know if English is not your first language.

English is my first language, thats why the brief is in English. What in particular in the designer instructions do you wish to make me aware of?

Hello sir/madam,

Please rate and review my entry #25724989. If there's any improvement needed, don't hesitate to provide some feedback.

Thank you and have a good day.